zenkigen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Daily2oon10032005]

i watch the daily toons daily..

this is my first review...a nd i have to say this, with all the crap that comes into this place, the random shit coming through daily2oon makes me laugh more often than most... great work guys... keep the crap coming out the bum!

TheStarSyndicate responds:

:)

[Bruce the Shitzu 1]

nice

all in all great start, learn to draw in flash though man, the quality was bad.... great work none the less.

[Summer Idiots...]

well you got a definate 4 from me

i have to give it to you, great work for a kid your age... what will make you great is somethign else though... 1. story line... develope something with style that will put your name on the list.... im sorry but your projecting something outwards that you are part of... the youth... but you know what? tomorrow's nobodies is cool for kids your age, and teenagers, other than that the 'social' teen thing is crap... try to push your storyline above the mark, and bring out something that makes you think... if you can do this you will get respect from all ages... 2. character design... study study study, study how to do characters, how to do environments, etc... find a way to get every drawing book that you can in existance... and then practice at least 2 to 3 hours a day developing your art skills. 3. believe in yourself, you've done great work so far 4. dont be lazy... laziness will make your flash crap... none the less great work kid.

[Deliverance DVD]

excellent

your really pushing your boundaries and thats wonderful... one comment i must make though is that your voice sounded scripted, and not that of a war torn man with passion. Try not to read a script next time, but to just stand there and recall the "memory" from your own mind. None the less, your really pushing your skills, and are getting alot better... great work.

[Sphere Fight 6]

excellent

great animation... great work... you know where this work shines? when your main character turned around to kick that little stone... just goes to show the small details... excellent excellent work man... keep contributing... its appreciated!

[blockheads]

excellent work

yeah this was dope... the track, the scene itself... and the use of timing ... all in all a great peice... in my bookmarks.

[Tutorials 4 Flash (Beg.)]

nice

you should stick to teaching scripts, your blood tutorial is just bad... your colors arent realistic, and that effect would only work if it was blood sitting on a log, blood doesnt drip unless it has something to drip off of, and blood splatters according to how its applied... without an object to apply it to you cant really have a tutorial about blood... maybe on how the color of blood is... and that was too red.... its usually darker... none the less, your a great programmer, and should push thta edge, or get some education in drawing/art before you attempt to teach it.

ShiningLight responds:

Thanx. i realy apreciate that. (about me as a good programmer.

[Afterliving]

beautiful work

much passion...

[The SRMS Movie Preview]

wow

beautiful...at first i thought it wasnt going to pan out but it definately did... a great production... i woudl like to see some dialog pan out, you definately have the ability... i dont know if you drew those characters without tracing or without models, but wow, very good.

[The New Years Party 2]

good work

Its this kind of work that makes me come back to newgrounds... The voices should have been altered to sound different... it was obviously one person..but the initial conversation was realistic as far as dialog went... very moving... the sex scene was kind of off the wall and distracting to the peice... i could understand more if you wuold take it from a variable perspective, like other parts of their relationship... not just fucking...and only that,.. but hey, thats your focus... none the less a really good work. I got ya bookmarked. I'm going to look at your other stuff. keep going.

ze