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that was pretty crap. in many ways... the animation was bad...the blood effects on the face was catchy....the voices were bad (tape your mic to a drum stick,t hen tape the drumstick to your desk, or some solid object) ... study character drawing a bit, and make a decent political statement. The thing was plain silly... so you get a 5 for the vote.
Thanks. I hate drawing on the computer its a realy pain in the ass i can draw on normal paper though. thanks for the awesome review dude. if you liked this you check out my other toons
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This was funny and a good visual of what the song said... it was good. nice work.
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this wasnt bad at all until you decided to put a plot in with text... instead of graphically doing it...good animation none the less, the speed felt right..the music was dead on, good character designs..its just like it was going really well until it turned into reading a novel... then i got really bored with the slow ring thing..none the less it was good.
well i'd hardly say you had to read very much but im sure it will get better as it gose.
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This is classic work here... just great. Animation was not ultra poor... I liked the movements, the first person perspective...but the timing and character graphics (the hand was too slow and bad) coudl have been better... great none the less..why? The plot was just cracked me up... great work.
lol cheers, glad u liked, the hand was a bit shit lol, i always rush things towards the end :)
excellent
All in all, minimal use of animation, great silouette work, and a first for spoken word, at least i have seen. Very powerful message. Excellent work, will be visiting your website.
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hey i can understand your point, but its a bit off the far end... I can see a right winger putting out the same thing, and inserting their own political drama. This cant be the future, because the people wont allow it. Both sides. This is what america is about to the core. You shouldnt have taken a political side with this, then it would have been great. Ultimately its the politicians who would do it. If you dont know by now, the political parties change their motto as soon as their positions are threatened. Its about power, no matter what ideology they throw at you.
THIS IS A GREAT TUTORIAL!
You definately laid down the basics direct and to the point. These concepts are essential to all artist, and are the timeless tricks of the trade. Knowing what was brought to light in this tutorial will improve your work x 10000. Just dont forget a plot!
search for andrew loomis in google, i believe the site is save loomis .. it features some online books which covers figure drawing in depth.
nice...but like you said...
good character work...but no plot... i can definately see you going places, but you lack patience. Work on some better background designs, analize character walking, and develope your plots... Visually you have a great eye... try to write ideas constantly to develope your sense of storytelling... just jot down one shot ideas, and then if you like them, build from them...Excellent work none the less.
yea this was just some random stuff spilling out of my head to fill time while i was bored. If you want to see some of my good backrounds, watch The sleeper series.
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This goes to show that top notch animation isnt everything. This is a great short!
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This actually is one of the better clay's i've seen, animation bad, but great concept, and the voiceovers were top notch!! Hope to see some more
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