zenkigen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tutorials 4 Flash (Beg.)]

nice

you should stick to teaching scripts, your blood tutorial is just bad... your colors arent realistic, and that effect would only work if it was blood sitting on a log, blood doesnt drip unless it has something to drip off of, and blood splatters according to how its applied... without an object to apply it to you cant really have a tutorial about blood... maybe on how the color of blood is... and that was too red.... its usually darker... none the less, your a great programmer, and should push thta edge, or get some education in drawing/art before you attempt to teach it.

ShiningLight responds:

Thanx. i realy apreciate that. (about me as a good programmer.

[Suicidal Jon!]

after just spending 5 minutes writing a review...

I wrote a review to some kid whining about life being horrible. Then he gets what he wants... a bunch of people saying boo hoo, are you ok? AIM me, ill talk to you. I wasnt rude, just straight to the point. I've had friends commit suicide... This is a breath of fresh air to all the suicidal kids sitting back with a big mac, screaming at their parents about how mean they are to them. Whining about the kids they go to school with because they push them into a locker... Meanwhile there is a large portion of the country without food, or water. Good humourous take on it. I've had friends commit suicide... and they didnt talk about it... they did it. People whining about it, obviously just want attention, or they would have done the deed.

JonReid responds:

Yes..... exactly what I was thinking......

[Snoopy's Rant]

sorry

ill will press burns... and if reason you got 0 on the review is because you increased the speed of the voice rather than changing the pitch. So i couldnt understand it... and illwill press kills... sorry you got a 2 vote.

THIS-IS-AN-ALT responds:

Hey, you didn't vote 0, and thats all that matters.

[Republican Man]

ehhh

that was pretty crap. in many ways... the animation was bad...the blood effects on the face was catchy....the voices were bad (tape your mic to a drum stick,t hen tape the drumstick to your desk, or some solid object) ... study character drawing a bit, and make a decent political statement. The thing was plain silly... so you get a 5 for the vote.

gclpunk responds:

Thanks. I hate drawing on the computer its a realy pain in the ass i can draw on normal paper though. thanks for the awesome review dude. if you liked this you check out my other toons

[Nightmare On Floor 53]

yes...yess....

This is classic work here... just great. Animation was not ultra poor... I liked the movements, the first person perspective...but the timing and character graphics (the hand was too slow and bad) coudl have been better... great none the less..why? The plot was just cracked me up... great work.

SuperDuck-Spanjj responds:

lol cheers, glad u liked, the hand was a bit shit lol, i always rush things towards the end :)

[free time fun!]

nice...but like you said...

good character work...but no plot... i can definately see you going places, but you lack patience. Work on some better background designs, analize character walking, and develope your plots... Visually you have a great eye... try to write ideas constantly to develope your sense of storytelling... just jot down one shot ideas, and then if you like them, build from them...Excellent work none the less.

notorious responds:

yea this was just some random stuff spilling out of my head to fill time while i was bored. If you want to see some of my good backrounds, watch The sleeper series.

[Now & Before]

nice work

the character disolution was great, excellent work overall...captured the spirit well... i would suggest doing a similar peice using the brush rather than pencil,it gives it much more character, and feel free to use color too... excellent concept :D loved it!

Shaihulud responds:

Thanks for the input. I learned about the power of the brush tool 70% of the way through the making of this movie. My next piece will use the brush and more color.

[Mad Science Story]

excellent

EXCELLENT character work. You just need to get your walking bit down, however the hopping worked great. The concept was basic..and dark, it kept me hooked. Drop me an email sometime so we can collaborate.

yetifemme responds:

Thanks. I'll probably try to do better walking animation on my next try.